Thursday, April 07, 2011

Amendment Proposal :)

As you know, women had been mistreated through out the American history. They didn't have many rights neither the right to make their own decisions. Many men abused from them and nothing was done. So, women rebel against men and the government by making some organizations. Then, years laters, they began to received some rights. But even today, the women still discriminated. Even though, there had been many changes and the women had made the difference and had meke history. After all, there had been some laws, constitutions, and amendments proposals made for the women rights.

According to all the rights that had been made, I would like to make some changes and create a new amendment for the constitution. My reasons of making this new amendment would help the countries rate of women being abused to decrease. My proposal is based on making justice and giving certain rights to the women. So, there is this law which was applied specially for the women rights. This law is called Law #54 which a women has the right to send to jail any men who made spousal abuse or a verbal accusation with no proof of physical abuse. I think this law should be applied also to any women who gets abused by a men. I mean to a women besides being the spouse of a men. Men are very abusive with other women besides their spouse. Also, I think that if a women calls the police supposedly because she had been physically abused by him and they don't find any evidence of what she said, she should be send to a trial for false police reports. Another example could be that they call the police for no reason, just to manipulate the other. In this case, both should be punished just because they are calling the police just for manipulation. The police should be focus in protecting women who are being really hurt. Many women maintains in silence and lets the men to abuse from her, so this should stop and women should speak up. If the government apply this law as an amendment, maybe the number of women being killed or abused by men might reduces. The injustice against women or men should STOP. If this keeps going on, the world would be turned into a place where abusing from others would be legal. That sounds awkward, but its the truth. The government its not helping too much! What do you want...To women get extinct by men? So, please react and its not too late too make a better change for the women as well for the men.  Everyone should have equality and the same laws integrated for each human being.

Women and men should deserve the same rights. Lets make a change to the world and you will see a difference. Abuse should not be seen anymore. All the ones who commits this cruel act or breaks a law should be punished.


National Women Society
                
                 Amendments of the US Constitution
  • 1st Amendment: All people including women should have the right to choose the religion they want and  their own beliefs without any criticizing them. 
  • 8th Amendment: It should protect innocent people from harsh or cruel punishments.
  • 13th Amendment: Abolition of Slavery ; All black women and men should deserve to have a normal life, because they are humans like the whites. The only different is their skin color and heritage.
  • 15th Amendment: Racial Suffrage ; All color women and men should be treated equally! People should not discriminate them just because they have a dark skin color.
  • 19th Amendment: Women Suffrage ; All women should have the right to vote since their opinions should count too. Not only men could decide for everyone. That is just so unfair, because everyone should have the right to say what they think.
  • Another Amendment: Women should have the opportunity to be part of the senator representatives or become a president. Women are also intelligent and have awesome ideas to prosper
  • My Amendment: All women should deserved to be pay equally in a job. Women also puts a lot of effort and do jobs better than men!
  • My Amendment: Women rights such as divorce rights and vote to right should be respected and not violated by any law.
  • My Amendment: Women protection laws such as the one who protectd them from sexual harrasment and abuse, rape, etc... should NOT be violated!
       * Some of these amendments had been changed in my own way*

 Bibliography:  - 14th Amendment   - Amendments  - Law #54

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